Saturday, October 1, 2011

Saturday Snark - Number 3

This is rapidly becoming my favorite blog habit, this Saturday Snark thing that the lovely Marie Sexton came up with.

Don't forget to visit Marie's blog where you'll find plenty of excellent examples of prime snark throughout the day. Clicky

This week, I've gone back to my current release Stolen Summer. This little exchange takes place shortly after Evan returns from Pakistan. He and Colin are preparing a traditional English Sunday roast for Evan's parents. But these two lads are easily distracted...

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I shivered when he swept his hands to my waist, pulling me close. I wound my arms around him and kissed him back. His erection pressed against mine.

“When your parents have gone…” he gasped, his breath hot on my face.

I fought for breath, for self-control. “Yes.” I kissed him again and tasted wine on his lips.

“You’d better turn those bloody potatoes, then. The sooner we eat, the sooner they’ll leave.” He pulled away and turned to the sink. He turned on the cold water tap, ran his hands beneath the water and splashed his face with it.

I did the same, still shaken. The icy water brought me back to the warm kitchen, the aroma of roasting potatoes.

“Jesus, Evan.” Colin’s hand drifted across my crotch before he reached for the wine. “You might want to find an apron or something.” His grin was devilish.


8 comments:

  1. ROFL. I love that last paragraph.

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  2. LOL! Very funny. Love the potatoes and the apron. Great snark. :)

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  3. Hehe! Love that one!

    Thanks for being one of my regular snarkers. :-)

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  4. Glad you all enjoyed the scene. :D
    Marie, my pleasure. I loves me a bit of snark.

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  5. I just finished this book this morning, i loved it, its amazing and probably the best book i have read this year. I can't wait to read more of your work.

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  6. Josie, thank you so much for your lovely comment. I can't even begin to tell you how happy that makes me. :D

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