Back at the yard, Grace fixed a bran mash for the colt and sent Harry home. She noticed that he drove off in the direction of ‘The Palomino’. She didn’t think that the fifty pounds that Mr. Tattenham had given him would last until morning. He’d be eating beans on toast for the rest of the week, as he always did. She wondered how a person could drink so much and live. She poured the mash into the colt’s manger and checked his water before turning out the light. Bats fluttered in the dusk and a nightjar called out from the poplars. She locked the tack room and stood for a moment, enjoying the silence. The horses were all at rest. Allonby slept with his head over the stable door and his white star gleamed softly. He jumped a little when the gates opened. Grace wondered if Harry had forgotten something and walked towards the cottage. She wanted to get out of her suit and lounge about in her Homer Simpson pyjama bottoms and old slapper tee shirt. It was time to pull up the drawbridge for the day and wonder what she was going to do with her useless weekend off.
“Grace.” He stood in the middle of the drive. The night breeze ruffled his hair.
She knew she wasn’t dreaming. She heard the slow tick of his car’s engine as it cooled and the scent of juniper and lemon drifted across the space between them. Grace stopped and looked at him, not sure what to say. She ached to touch him, to assure herself that he was real.
“Christopher?” She put her trembling hands into her pockets and waited.
“I’m sorry, so sorry.” His voice was husky, soft. He took a step towards her. “I’ve done nothing but try to think of what to say to you.”
“About what?” she asked. She felt numb and scared. Afraid of what he wanted to say.
“About us, about being scared. I couldn’t phone you, Grace. It sounds so stupid, but hearing your voice just makes me realize how much I miss you. It frightens me how much I miss you.”
To hear her own words and feelings echoed made her want to weep. She wanted to tumble into his arms. Instead, she swallowed and looked up at the night sky, the first stars winked against a backdrop of deep, velvety blue. “I know.” She said, finally. “If it’s any comfort, I feel the same.”
“Thank God,” he whispered. He crossed those few feet between them and held her. He sighed into her hair and Grace felt his heart pounding against her breast. “I thought I was going mad.”
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ReplyDeleteYou know, imo it's much more difficult to write an anticipation scene than a love scene. But you pull it off with aplomb.
Hoping you're finding something out right now?
awwww!!!! That's so sweet!!!!
ReplyDeleteLove it! I'm wondering what happens next!
more! more! more!!!!!
:-D did I mention I like it??? ;)
Felt as if I were right there with them. I really like your descriptions. And the dialogue too.
ReplyDeleteLovely, understated descriptions - of the setting and their emotions. Very poignant.
ReplyDeleteThis is so wonderfully immediate. You get so much across with just a few words: it takes real skill to do that, and I'm totally jealous.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, as always.
Beautiful. I look forward to reading your work every week because you have such an elegant, wonderful style of writing. Can't wait to see more, keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteAww. Now that's the real McCoy of love there. (No body parts pounding in a ghostly parody of the sentiment._ It's very tender, Fire. Good job.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet scene. Gave me little tummy flutterings.
ReplyDeleteI love your writing--it's so atmospheric, and I always feel like you plop me right into the scene. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteI'm loving this. I need more! I liked the way you wrote about the interaction between the two.
ReplyDeleteThank you all, for your comments and encouragement.
ReplyDeleteI can't even begin to tell you how much I'm enjoying writing this.
This was beautiful. So sweet. I just can't stop from saying "aaaaw". Well done!
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