tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post8686496716607056117..comments2024-01-17T03:11:49.030-08:00Comments on kestrel rising: If this is Springer, it must be Tuesdaysue laybournhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-6864862525837747902009-10-21T10:39:26.014-07:002009-10-21T10:39:26.014-07:00Thanks for your comments and suggestions, Purgies....Thanks for your comments and suggestions, Purgies. I'll go back and tone down the red-head's advances. As they're not really married and, this is the first time Tessie has been in a situation like this, I'll keep her reaction muted. She's still finding her feet in this whole bizarre arrangement.<br />Bryn, I loves Kristian and he's not a bad lad, really. I'll try and post a piece next week that shows his more 'caring' side. ;)<br /><br />So glad I've untrunked this. I've fallen in love with it again and looking forward to finishing it.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-83154770327651464162009-10-21T10:13:30.442-07:002009-10-21T10:13:30.442-07:00LOL, part of Kristian's attractiveness is that...LOL, part of Kristian's attractiveness is that cocky attitude. <br /><br />This actually feels like a more traditional romance to me, Sue, than most of your work. Bet you'd have sucess marketing this one. I have a friend who's just gotten a several book deal for a historical western romance.Jan O'Hara (Tartitude)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04930129153455367820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-84262921825737479592009-10-20T16:16:10.758-07:002009-10-20T16:16:10.758-07:00As always, your narrative style just draws me in. ...As always, your narrative style just draws me in. I really like the dynamic between the characters. I'd be interested to read more!Jennifer Walkuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15441887850464334900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-601466606982805462009-10-20T14:29:36.443-07:002009-10-20T14:29:36.443-07:00Those redheaded hussies. You have to watch out for...Those redheaded hussies. You have to watch out for them. I still like Salim better. Kristian is just too slick or something. Too comfortable with himself.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-14003990940444080872009-10-20T13:05:57.936-07:002009-10-20T13:05:57.936-07:00I like it, though I think our lovely lady of the n...I like it, though I think our lovely lady of the night came on a bit strong in the face of a "married" couple. And if this is historical western, would his name spelled Christian instead? (did they even use that as a name, back then?)K.A. Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00926336938605410096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-39276108914057696422009-10-20T12:48:31.999-07:002009-10-20T12:48:31.999-07:00I liked Kristian, and am intrigued now that I know...I liked Kristian, and am intrigued now that I know they're really not married. Do I smell a possible romance between the two? Great description.ChristaCarol Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02908423468344511136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-17053055692032184252009-10-20T09:05:54.099-07:002009-10-20T09:05:54.099-07:00The description of the 'whore' is good, bu...The description of the 'whore' is good, but I think it is a little too -in your face-, IMO. I did like the reaction of the 'wife', though, I would think she would have been a little more agressive in her reactions. It might not be in her nature though...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-26386229374498192992009-10-20T08:56:56.187-07:002009-10-20T08:56:56.187-07:00lol, love the last line! Love the interaction bet...lol, love the last line! Love the interaction between the MC's and the red-head. You've hit the right atmosphere and humor here. <br /><br />can't wait to read more!!!J.F. Posthumushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17033765098660171013noreply@blogger.com