tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post8484315755909493838..comments2024-01-17T03:11:49.030-08:00Comments on kestrel rising: First Teaser of 2010sue laybournhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-5635771208010928632010-01-08T02:03:03.554-08:002010-01-08T02:03:03.554-08:00I felt his pain and hers in this. Good job. Makes...I felt his pain and hers in this. Good job. Makes me hate that 'Prophet' even more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-17208387675730273952010-01-05T15:53:42.767-08:002010-01-05T15:53:42.767-08:00Wow, this is awesome! I've missed reading snip...Wow, this is awesome! I've missed reading snippets of this story. First, I agree that Prophet needs an ass whooping. Second, the way you use words is just so beautiful like in: her fear lurking like darkness. Also, I love "for fuck's sake." One of my favorite expressions. Beautiful, as always.Jennifer Walkuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15441887850464334900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-63728281012200877132010-01-05T13:59:48.672-08:002010-01-05T13:59:48.672-08:00Oh, noes! Amy and Ink are right--Prophet needs an...Oh, noes! Amy and Ink are right--Prophet needs an ass-kicking, stat!<br /><br />Great tension here, and I could really feel Duncan's emotions. More Fire awesomeness--woot!houndrathttp://www.houndrat.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-50668698879332351912010-01-05T08:43:12.939-08:002010-01-05T08:43:12.939-08:00thanks, peeps!
I'm thinking that this is going...thanks, peeps!<br />I'm thinking that this is going to be the one that stops me from working on the WIP for a while. I've been sitting here thinking on how to beef it up and I've had an idea or two.<br />I'm so glad you're all enjoying it.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-66416595195960819122010-01-05T08:20:08.361-08:002010-01-05T08:20:08.361-08:00Wow! I like this. Love the description here: the P...Wow! I like this. Love the description here: the Prophet's eyes, in particular. (I have a teensy crush on him now. Go unscrupulous deranged characters!)Parametrichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04253928288479596268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-30543866880736869522010-01-05T07:48:49.498-08:002010-01-05T07:48:49.498-08:00I'll second Sunna's thought: the prophet r...I'll second Sunna's thought: the prophet really needs to be knocked down... into a grave. A deep, deep grave. :D <br /><br />Love the tenseness and the feelings portrayed here. Can't wait to read more!!!J.F. Posthumushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17033765098660171013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-6471038651828720552010-01-05T06:45:28.007-08:002010-01-05T06:45:28.007-08:00Love how this novel seems so different from some o...Love how this novel seems so different from some of your other stuff I've read. I know you can do angst and love scenes, so it's great getting to read something more actiony from you. And you do a great job of interweaving emotion into the action. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-23314317307806857542010-01-05T06:28:09.148-08:002010-01-05T06:28:09.148-08:00Oh, I cannot WAIT for someone to kick this prophet...Oh, I cannot WAIT for someone to kick this prophet's ass. <br /><br />This was such a lovely combination of angst and violence, Sue.sunnahttp://amybai.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-54981600206253655772010-01-05T05:51:25.865-08:002010-01-05T05:51:25.865-08:00wow, intense! I really feel for Duncan here. It wa...wow, intense! I really feel for Duncan here. It was so sudden, even for me, caught me by surprise. Nice.ChristaCarol Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02908423468344511136noreply@blogger.com