tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post6382654125169396249..comments2024-01-17T03:11:49.030-08:00Comments on kestrel rising: Time is passing way too quickly-Tuesday already??sue laybournhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-77629960185878941602009-10-14T15:55:08.018-07:002009-10-14T15:55:08.018-07:00I think I'm running out of fresh ways to rave ...I think I'm running out of fresh ways to rave about your description and ability to convey so much emotion--all with very little external action. ( Meaning no guns or impending death.)Jan O'Hara (Tartitude)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04930129153455367820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-42898432620369748682009-10-13T16:18:54.358-07:002009-10-13T16:18:54.358-07:00Great descriptions and voice. Very heartfelt. Ever...Great descriptions and voice. Very heartfelt. Every line is dripping with emotion.Jennifer Walkuphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15441887850464334900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-6138439740365710972009-10-13T14:30:18.549-07:002009-10-13T14:30:18.549-07:00Really love the descriptions here - the way you us...Really love the descriptions here - the way you use them to really get us inside the head of the MC - you give us just enough to get the emotion through :) Great job. <br /><br />I have a little blog award on my site for you! Not sure if you post those sorts of things, but I wanted you to know I think you are very Kreativ.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09521315180241354286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-16825242408002759722009-10-13T11:19:52.873-07:002009-10-13T11:19:52.873-07:00Beautiful descriptions. I could almost feel the s...Beautiful descriptions. I could almost feel the silk cloth.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-80041428183658121002009-10-13T10:29:58.192-07:002009-10-13T10:29:58.192-07:00Your lyric style is so lovely. I don't think ...Your lyric style is so lovely. I don't think the change in time and place would be jarring, though in looking back over you last teaser when Katya's supposed to be 17, right? I did not for one second think she was a day younger than 30. Not that you're aiming for a YA feel, obviously, but the scene with hunky man read like she was a very mature adult.Gretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327185025020171674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-36228752201862910022009-10-13T10:00:59.734-07:002009-10-13T10:00:59.734-07:00Aw, so sweet! The description of the pony and how ...Aw, so sweet! The description of the pony and how she imagines him buying it is just perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-41680800262745201292009-10-13T09:19:37.942-07:002009-10-13T09:19:37.942-07:00Wonderful, vivid description. I felt like I was t...Wonderful, vivid description. I felt like I was there with her--and I could see that little pony curled up in her hand. Really touching scene.Debra Drizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750912933889904216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8849265595241988339.post-49104343606389327872009-10-13T06:57:12.394-07:002009-10-13T06:57:12.394-07:00Ah, so sad! I love how you put so much emotion int...Ah, so sad! I love how you put so much emotion into the simplest of scenes. <br /><br />One note - you've got a comma at "the silk, itself was beautiful" that shouldn't be there. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com